Comments on: Wretched Writers Welcomed http://workingtitlez.com/2008/09/15/wretched-writers-welcomed/ Book Publishing News and Resources for Authors Thu, 26 Apr 2012 23:41:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Sue http://workingtitlez.com/2008/09/15/wretched-writers-welcomed/comment-page-1/#comment-13 Sue Wed, 24 Sep 2008 14:27:37 +0000 http://carolynhayesuber.wordpress.com/?p=404#comment-13 I submitted my "worst high school metaphors" piece to my writers critique group, just for fun. They took seriously and critiqued it! I've named it Hefty Bag and it's dedicated to Garrison Keillor's "Guy Noir". For the most part, they skewered it royally, but admitted it made them laugh. So I guess it was a success. A favorite line was: They stung like rock salt in your ass when your cousin’s dad shoots at you for looking in at her in the bathroom window. Proud to say that one is mine! So yeah, you can post it if you want. I submitted my “worst high school metaphors” piece to my writers critique group, just for fun. They took seriously and critiqued it! I’ve named it Hefty Bag and it’s dedicated to Garrison Keillor’s “Guy Noir”.

For the most part, they skewered it royally, but admitted it made them laugh. So I guess it was a success. A favorite line was:

They stung like rock salt in your ass when your cousin’s dad shoots at you for looking in at her in the bathroom window.

Proud to say that one is mine!

So yeah, you can post it if you want.

]]> By: Dr. Tom Bibey http://workingtitlez.com/2008/09/15/wretched-writers-welcomed/comment-page-1/#comment-12 Dr. Tom Bibey Mon, 15 Sep 2008 09:45:31 +0000 http://carolynhayesuber.wordpress.com/?p=404#comment-12 The gong show of literature. drtombibey.wordpress.com The gong show of literature.

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